Dreaming Widow

By Dellani Oakes

Blood. Everything was covered with it. Her soul seemed to hover over her body as she sat in the car. This time, she was the passenger, not the driver. There was a hole in the windshield as if something had crashed through from the inside. Where was the driver? Where, for that matter, was she?

“Hello?” Her voice sounded small and lost in the darkness. “Hello?”

No one answered. She heard the night sounds of crickets and cicadas in the trees. Somewhere nearby, frogs croaked. At a distance, she thought she heard the whoosh of cars passing.

What was that? The sound of car doors. Of someone calling. Lights flashed, like the beam of half a dozen flashlights.

“Hello?” she called again, but it was a faint sound. “Hello? Help! Help me!”

“Did you hear something?” A man’s voice, deep and resonant. “Hello?”

“Help!” she put as much energy into as she could, bellowing with all her strength. Gasping, she waited.

“There!” The same voice said. “I knew I saw something.” A face appeared at the window. “You’re going to be all right,” he assured her, smiling. “We’re here. You’re safe.”

“My—husband. . . .”

“We’ll look when we get some more light down here. You stay still, ma’am. Help is on the way. Can we get some light over here?” he called over his shoulder.

Car headlights blazed. Her companion gasped, something making him go pale. The hand holding the flashlight shook and he stepped away from the car. She heard sounds of retching. He didn’t come back for several minutes. When he did, he was pale and sad. She could smell vomit on his breath.

“I’m sorry, ma’am. Your husband is dead. It looks like he was thrown from the car.”

“Oh, my God! No! No!” She tried to get out of the car, but her body wouldn’t move.

“Stay still, ma’am. Help is on the way.”

“Brian? Brian? No, God no! Brian?”


Blythe woke up screaming a man’s name. She felt her lips form it, though her mind couldn’t remember putting the word there.

Who’s Brian? Why was I calling for him? Did he say husband? I’m not married—though I was, to Alec.

“What’s going on?” she asked herself. “What’s up with these dreams?”

Trauma brought on by the car accident, she told herself. That was all. Nothing more. Maybe brought on by the pain pills. They made some people hallucinate, right? Or maybe the doctor was wrong. Maybe she had hit her head. Something wasn’t right. How could she keep dreaming about car accidents that weren’t hers?

Unable to sleep and feeling alone, she turned on the TV. An all night news channel had footage from a horrible accident on I-95 south, between Edgewater and Titusville.

“. . . . a car hit an armadillo in the dark, spinning out of control as the tires blew. Forty-three year old Brian Rogers and his wife Rose, flipped three times before landing in this stand of trees, well hidden from the road. Passing motorists spotted the car and stopped, calling the police. Rose Rogers is in Parrish Hospital, listed in critical condition. Her husband was pronounced dead on the scene, his body cut in half when he was thrown from the car.”

“Brian?” Horrified, Blythe turned off the TV. “I saw that accident. I was there!” Hands over her mouth, Blythe lay in bed, trying hard to come to grips with what she’d seen and heard. “I was there!”

The Iron Writer Challenge #21 – 2013 Summer Solstice Open Preliminary Round, F. Scott Fitzgerald Bracket

Flying Bicycle

The Iron Writer Challenge #21

500 Words, 5 Days, 4 Elements

2013 Iron Writer Summer Solstice Open

Preliminary Round

F. Scott Fitzgerald Bracket


 The Authors:

B.R. SnowM.D. PitmanDellani Oakes

The Elements:

Electric Flying Bicycle
A doppelganger
An obscure Black and White Television Drama/Comedy

 On Your OwnBernie Snow

B R Snow

“Looking for what?”

“The lost city. Atlantis.

“Plato’s Atlantis?”

“No, the freshwater version.”

“Freshwater Atlantis.”


“And you think it’s here at Lake Tahoe?”

“It’s here. But not at… in. At the bottom.”

“Off your meds again?”

“Those things are useless. They cloud my thinking.”

“Who knew?”

“You, of all people, should be supportive. My twin. The only family I have left.”

“Whose fault is that?”

“Nevertheless, without each other, we’d be on our own.”

“Probably not the time to mention this, what with you off your meds, but you are on your own.”

“Funny. Every time I look in the mirror, you’re there.”

“Because I’m you…some bizarre doppelganger you conjure when you go off your meds.”

“Tomato, Tomahto. Twin, doppelganger. No difference.”

“Okay. Why don’t you put the hammer down and we’ll go to the galley and fix a cocktail?”

“Who’s got time?”

“Gee, I don’t know. A guy with a yacht who doesn’t work could probably find time for a cocktail.”

“We work all the time.”

“No, you concoct wild-assed schemes. You fill your day, but you don’t work. C’mon, it’s hot. Let’s have that drink.”

“What kind?”

“Vodka martini?”

“We prefer gin.”

“Gin it is.”

“We’re out of gin.”

“Okay. Bloody Mary?”

“No, they scare us.”

“Scare us?”

“We always spill and it reminds us of…”


“Blood. And Mom and Dad.”

“That was a long time ago.”

“No, we spilled one this morning. Remember?”

“I was talking about…forget it. Wine?”

“Red or white?”

“I’m thinking both.”



“Too foamy.”

“Whiskey sour?”

“Too green.”

“Prozac Slurpee?”




“What the hell…?”

“It’s a bicycle. An electric flying bicycle.”


“We pedal like normal, but these propellers make it fly.”

“Sounds like a lot of work.”

“Work, work, work…never stops.”

“Why not a helicopter?”

“Too noisy.”

“Sure. What’s the bike for?”

“To help us find the whirlpool.”

“Whirlpool? In the middle of Lake Tahoe?”

“Well, we can’t be sure it’s in the middle. That’s why we need the bike.”

“Of course. So what’s the deal with this whirlpool?”

“Whirlpools…drains. Duh. Once we find it, it will lead us to the plug.”


“Yes. On the bottom.”

“There’s a plug on the bottom of Lake Tahoe?”

“Yes. And we’re going to find it and pull it.”


“So we can drain the lake thereby revealing Atlantis.”

“The freshwater version.”

“Of course. Tahoe’s freshwater. It’d be stupid to look for the saltwater one here.”

“You’re a lunatic.”

“That’s what they said about Admiral Nelson-And don’t be so hard on yourself.”


“Admiral Nelson. He was the star of my favorite TV show, Voyage to the Bottom of the Sea.”

“I don’t remember it.”

“You weren’t around much then. Good show. Especially the first season in black and white. Then it went color and got…vivid.”

“Vivid can be a real problem.”

“Are you ready?”

“For what?”

“To take the bike up and find the whirlpool.”

“I’ll sit this one out.”

“C’mon. I need you.”

“No. You’re on your own.”

Goin’ DownDellani Oakes

Dellani Oakes

Wil sat on his flying electric bike, staring at the sapphire depths of the ocean. Somewhere, beneath the surface, lay their objective. Revving his engine, he prepared for the drop into the icy waters of the abyssal plain..

The rest of the platoon hovered around him, dressed in deep sea gear, multiple doppelgangers, waiting for the signal to jettison into oblivion.

It was strange to be on Old Earth. Stranger still was the Galactic Marine Corps’ interest in the place. Virtually abandoned 200 years ago, Earth had been reclaimed by nature. The few humans who remained were savages, wielders of crude weapons, hardly worthy adversaries. But something else lurked in the ocean—beings of half forgotten legends.

How they had come to the attention of the Marines, Wil didn’t know. He and his platoon were here to contain any possible threat before it could advance.

A voice crackled in his ear. “Ready, Sergeant?”

“Aye, Captain.”

“Commence drop in five – four – three. . . .”

The door opened at their feet and 32 cycles zipped down the ramp, making the 2,000 foot drop to the surface. Hovering over the waves, they were surrounded by force shields to keep the cold and pressure at bay. Still experimental, the shields were supposed to be impenetrable. Wil had his doubts.

Wil accessed the battle plans, projecting them to his platoon. The dive initiated on his command. Thirty-two cycles sliced into the water. Down they dropped, rapidly nearing their goal. Less than a hundred meters from their objective, Wil’s electrical system glitched. Instead of the detailed battle plans, he saw flickering images of an old black and white TV show. His visor was filled with a banner proclaiming “The Adventures of Superpup”. It was gone just as suddenly.

“You see that, Sarge?”

“Sure did.” Wil tapped his helmet and the battle plans filled his visor once more.

Something else caught his attention, far below and to his left. Raising a hand, he called a halt. Black as night, the water undulated around them. Wil’s raised fist was invisible, but the HALT message flashing inside their helmets, was not.

“What is that?” The same voice filled his ears.

“I’d say, that’s our goal, Corporal.”

With rapid movements, Wil and his corporal deployed the team. On his mark, they descended, surrounding an opalescent dome. As the bikes approached, a panel slid back and they were sucked in, unable to stop. They bounced around a huge tube, the suction drawing them inexorably forward.

A few minutes later, they were set down on a platform. The water drained away, leaving scattered puddles. They faced a 20 foot door, which opened slowly. A giant of a man dressed in scintillating blue robes walked out, smiling. His skin was indigo, his hair white. He held a metallic staff in one hand. The top was decorated with a single, multi-faceted diamond. He advanced to stand before Wil, bowing.

“Welcome, my friends. Welcome to Atlantis.” 

The ChoiceMichael Pitman

M.D. Pitman

Uncle Leonard was generous and kind, so after his death his adopted hometown of Atlanta, Indiana was as devastated as his family.

His eldest nephew, John, and his wife, Mary, adored the man that was the doppelganger of Alan Hale, the Skipper on Gilligan’s Island.

The day after Uncle Leonard died, they watched a marathon of old Alan Hale movies and shows. The especially enjoyed the ‘50s crime drama series Biff Baker, U.S.A.

“I’m telling you, John, there was a flying bicycle attached to an electric cord in the first episode.” Mary threw her head back and sighed.

“I’ll have to watch it again.” John shook his head. “I don’t remember it.”

“It’s in the background when Charles Bronson is first shown.”

John flashed a doubting stare.

“The road!” Mary yelled. “Eyes on the road before you hit something, or someone.”

The slick road, pitch black sky and echoing metal of rain pounding the rooftop made Mary uneasy. Even though they were just 45 minutes north of Indianapolis, the hamlet of 725 just a few more minutes away seemed isolated.

“Are we close?” Mary squinted to see an upcoming green destination sign. The headlights lit up: Atlanta 2 Miles (but someone crossed out in white spray paint Atlanta and wrote Atlantis).

“In this downpour, it might soon be Atlantis.”

Just as they passed the sign, the headlights shone on a man walking in the road. Before either could figure out what was happening, John spun the steering wheel left, then overcorrected right. The car spun on the slick road a full three times. John’s knuckles turned white. Mary’s head pressed against the window after it hit with a crack.

Before they stopped – headlights pointing south in the northbound lane – there was a THUD from the rear driver’s side fender.

John, rubbing his neck, groggily asked, “Mary, you okay.” When she didn’t answer, he asked again grimacing when he looked at her. “You okay, Hun?”

Mary’s head leaned against the window and her eyes were closed. Blood was smeared on the window and before he could yell her name she slowly moved and weakly uttered, “I think so.”

“I think we hit something, or – ” John trailed off because he knew it was likely someone.

Mary turned to John. “Was that a person we hit?”

“It may have been.”

“Do you think we … killed him?”

Mary, groggy and unaware she was bleeding, started to breathe heavily.

“We – need – to – call – 9-1-1,” she said in gasping breaths.

“Breathe, Hun. Let me check out what happened. It may have been … an animal?”

John glanced at his fender, which appeared undamaged, and slowly walked the twenty feet to a ditch where whatever he hit landed.

Rain tapped against a man’s dingy yellow raincoat. There was no blood, but the rain could have washed it away.

He walked into the muddy ditch. He placed two fingers on the man’s neck. No pulse.

He looked down at the body, then to the car and his injured wife. He finally stared into the blackness, closed his eyes and exhaled a deep breath.

The Iron Writer Challenge #21 – 2013 Summer Solstice Open Preliminary Round

The Iron Writer Challenge #21

2013 Iron Writer Summer Solstice Open

Preliminary Round

500 Words, 5 Days, 4 Elements


Charlotte Bronte Bracket

The Authors:

Tannis LaidlawSteve HarzKriss MortonEric Garrison


F. Scott Fitzgerald Bracket

The Authors:

Robbie ThomasB. R. SnowM.D. PitmanDellani Oakes


Joseph Conrad Bracket

The Authors:

Guy Anthony De MarcoDani J CaileA Francis RaymondGenevieve Dewey


Virginia Woolf Bracket

The Authors:

Tony JaegerJim WrightKyle B StiffA. B. Bourne

The Elements:

An Electric Flying Bicycle

A Doppelganger


An obscure Black & White Television Drama/Comedy